Sunday, November 22, 2009

The Road to 50,000, or Another Milestone Down and One More to Go

Someone implied that I am updating my word count without actually writing anything. Hmph! Just to prove that someone wrong--I can not name names, too--I'm posting my entire novel here, on my blog, for you to read.

Er, perhaps not. But I'll show you a "snippet" of what I've written today, including bad poetry and anagrams, which are pretty darned hard to write. Well, not so much the bad poetry, and I saved my really tricky anagram for another part.

Without further ado (or editing), here she is:


Tho Weir Creatures do not cast spells to call forth entrances to their Weir Wood, all other Trespassers to their realm must learn from the olde books this art. Be wary lest ye sojourn too long in the Weir Wood, for all these become lost, illusive and unearthly. The Weir Wood will leech life from you, and in time you will become too anemic of this worldliness to ever return. Even the Weir Creatures themselves cannot stay too long there. For tho it be their home, it is an unnatural home, one forged by the hateful Weird himself, and one suited only for such as he.
—Duncan, The Encyclopedia of the Lost

They rode out through Glennys Wood to the Quarry for the second time that night, Teagan and Fawkes and Coenred. Once again they left their horses untethered in the woods beyond the Quarry. Except Glidden. Glidden Teagan brought with her. Then they tramped into the dark woods from which they had earlier heard the echoing grunts and snorts of the fleeing Weir creatures, and then the sudden silence.

“We are here,” announced Coenred. “This,” he pointed to a very narrow grassy clearing that caught the moonlight and shimmered, “is the place that has long been afeared by my people. Its strong currents have pulled wanderers to this place, where they’ve been blessed with visions and healings and miracles, or just as likely been cursed with pains or deceptions or tragedy.” Coenred pointed to the area around an ancient oak, mossy and peppered with toadstools. Abundant hollows imbued a richness and depth on the area. Twisty branches weighted down the trees, bringing their arms closer to the ground like a canopy or an eave.

“It’s a lode point,” Fawkes explained. “A place where several lode lines converge. Lode points harness magical energies from across the globe, making magic seem to spill out at their seams. It’s a magical hot spot, churlish and unpredictable. Cast your spell precisely.”

Teagan took a deep breath and stepped into the lode point. Coenred and Glidden moved in, stopping close behind her, but Fawkes circled the rim of the area, and kept a wary eye on the woods, primed and watching for the attack of a Weir creature. “Rrghh. I don’t like the stillness here.”

Teagan listened, and could hear neither bird nor brook, though she knew a stream lay nearby, audible from both the Quarry and the woods on either side of the lode point.

“Aye. This place seems to swallow sound,” Coenred nodded.

“No doubt sound is carried off into the Weir Wood,” remarked Fawkes. “I can’t hear them coming from out there.” He gestured to Glennys Wood. “And I can’t hear them coming from in here.” He waved his hand about the lode point, past the hollows and the puddles, the towering trees and their reaching limbs. Every rock or tree or hollowed out stump could be an entrance to the Weir Wood. And an exit from it. “We’d best get started.”

Teagan knelt on the soft mossy ground cover and spread out a linen tablecloth in which she had wrapped the magical offerings. She rolled a small jar out of the napkin it was folded inside. She shook out several chunks of ice from a second napkin, and from a third she carefully removed Glidden’s piece of tumbleweed. “We need a bough of live lilac. Bend it over to this linen, and take care not to break it.” Coenred nodded and silently complied.

They were ready. Teagan sighed. Finally she opened Duncan’s book of spells. She began to read the ode. “Lovely woods, Dark is here.” She felt that it was so, more through her senses than her eyes. She began to feel the spell shaping itself. Teagan sank her fingers into the magic, deep in, and balled it up in her palms. She rolled it and turned it, and it began to give off an odor, somewhere between the aroma of almonds and the verdant stink of decomposition. She could see it forming, sense its spherical shape. It sparkled green and indigo.

She nearly lost her focus when she turned her attention to the next line. She recalled the image of the magic and willed it to turn from sparkling to crackling as she read: “Take what once was living fire.” So she took it. She snatched it from the linen, digging her fingers into the clay jar, spreading the ash across the linen, letting the black smear the white threads, painting dancing flame patterns on the nubbly cloth. This ash, tame and smooth and infinitely soft, this ash that had once been fire, hot, wild, untouchable. She made the sphere turn black and gold, like amber flames dancing among all that coal.

Teagan felt ready to move on. She kept her voice steady and her tone sure. Each phrase, each syllable was deliberate, careful, clear. “From the peat a sweetness grew.” She inhaled the fragrance of the lilac, turned the image of it over and inside out in her mind. With her finger she traced the plant from the blossom OR bud (if it closes at night) to the branch and the bark. She made herself know this life given from the earth. She saw how the blooming tree had grown from a sapling, and the sapling from a seed. She felt the graininess of the peat that had nourished that seed. And she thanked it. She smelled it and tasted it and felt its coolness on her skin.

Teagan let that coolness spread into a frigid iciness as she uttered the next line. “As water dies when cold and true,” her voice sang, low and steady. Certain. Teagan saw ice grow like fingers across a pond, crackling and snapping as it heaved and swelled and grew thick. She felt its smoothness and let the sharpness of its pieces prick her skin. An icy fog rose over her body and wafted across the awning, and Teagan let herself feel the shivers that shook Coenred and Fawkes’s bodies.

She stretched out her hands towards Coenred, and he gently placed his willow flute in them. She felt his care and patience while he had crafted and carved it. She felt, as if from memory, the light touch of his lips on the flute’s smoothed surface and the pressure of his breath as he had tested its first tentative notes. “Breath of home, the sweetest shire.” Suddenly the frigid cold was gone, blown away by a fragrant warmth of the hearth at Coenred’s home. She pictured him sitting there with his mother and his nephew and niece. She heard the lilting notes and felt them trickling down on her like soft moth-like steps. And then she thought of her home, of her own panting breath as she ran among the sage and the cactus. She felt the wind pulling against the brittle branches of a tumbleweed, snapping the weak roots out of the ground. Round and round she twirled, tasting dust that dried her mouth and coated her throat and caked her eyes till she could see nothing but pale brown. She was light and free and wild.

Teagan recited these words now without thinking about them, over and over. She tasted the lilac’s honey, the hollow woody stem of the flute, the ash, and the ice. She felt hot and cool and cold and comfortable. She felt the full weight of each line rushing at her one after the other, relentlessly, surging like waves, and when she could bear no more she shouted the two final lines. “Through the teeth of the rood, we come into your wood!”

Several points in the woods, like the points of a compass, shimmered and grew luminescent. Each was an access point to the Weir Wood, and Teagan, Coenred, Glidden, and Fawkes felt a gentle tug to each of them, drawing them into the dangerous forests the Weir inhabited. But one doorway drew them forcefully. Strike. But one opening was not gentle. They felt a forceful yank from the enormous old oak, which had twisted its arms like a cross and opened its hollow like a mouth. “The mouth of the rood,” Coenred whispered. He clasped Teagan’s hand, and with Fawkes and Glidden behind them, they stepped into the cavernous hollow.

*sigh* Competition is healthy. I'm so pleased that it looks like I'll be writing 50,000 words this month. Two more days oughta do it! I'll have the rest of the month to finish my second mystery sock and rejoice.

Saturday, November 21, 2009

take that!

I am ahead of Andrew by 129, no wait, 632 words.
Amy: 38,368
Andrew: 37,736


Neiner neiner I'm the winner!

Of course, I have other issues. Like failing at simple subtraction. That and spelling my own name wrong.

Friday, November 20, 2009

63.4% done

Word Count: 32,419

I've written over 5,500 words today. Yay! I was trying for 10,000 today, so that I can relax during my Thanksgiving vacation, but somewhere in the night I realized that 5,000 would be a much more reasonable goal. Thankfully, not everything I've written today is junk. And although I wouldn't say that my story is moving along quickly, it is making sense, and I've written several new characters, including a love interest for Teagan. Fun stuff! (Now if I can just get them typed up! Kidoodle does best if I write in a notebook while he plays in the living room. As interesting as a paper and pen may be, they are nothing to a keyboard and a desk full of techno goodies!)

If I write 5,000 words for three more days, I'll be able to write a little here and there while I spend Thanksgiving vacation with my entire family and some of Skedaddle's. *sigh* I can't wait. Here's to a write-happy weekend, and a family-full Thanksgiving!

Thursday, November 19, 2009

halfway

I have written 25,000 words. :D

Tuesday, November 10, 2009

The Lift Lounge

Nanowrimo word count: 10744

Yay! I can share an excerpt on my blog! I’ve written something interesting today. That’s not to say that it’s, well, good. However, I’m jumping from one idea into the next, and I quite like the resulting puddles. It’s a messy dance, but it’s mine.

Teagan was one of the last to be pushed into the elevator, and only managed to fit inside by drawing herself taller. The doors slid closed almost as soon as she was inside. She was facing the other passengers, and didn't have room to turn to face the entrance, which is how she was able to see the elfin man draw an unsharpened pencil from his pocket and jab it several times at the LL button by the rear doors.

Teagan felt her lungs bulge with a sharp intake of air as she gasped and tried to find something to grab along the smooth doors. "That lunatic is opening the service doors, while we are moving!" her mind screamed. Teagan wondered how this sardine packed group could stay inside a six by eight foot metal box while it careened at super sonic speeds through the earth’s underbelly. She saw the doors begin to open. A weighty unnamed Mister blocked her on one side. The bony elbows and hips of two brunette girl scouts would have been easy enough to push aside, had it not been for the nine other agents between herself and those doors.

She couldn’t stop him, and to her disbelief, no one else seemed to care if they were flying along, inches from a rock wall. Teagan closed her eyes against the less than jaunty image of stalagmite claws, speeding cables, and—perish the thought—other elevator carriages passing by. She tried to steady herself by noting the feel of the smooth and only slightly clammy metal against her hand and by measuring the weight of her heels on the elevator's floor.

Then the moment was spent and the doors were opened. No one and nothing moved, except for Teagan's head, which seemed to be tilting to first one side, then the other. Everything was bathed in a whiteness that she thought might be the precursor to unconsciousness.

The elevator hadn't stopped, but its doors were open. In one unified motion, the crowd stepped out, pulling Teagan with them. It was as if the elevator breathed them out of its mouth, and Teagan lifted her feet in time with theirs, relieved and even a little eager to find that they were headed into a brightly lit room rather than freefalling inside the earth's crust.

The chamber greeted its guests with a gaudy vaudevillian sign that blinked out “Lift Lounge” in 82 egg-sized round white bulbs. The cookie twins pushed against Teagan and strolled over to a large fountain. Teagan wandered behind them.

Beyond the gaudy welcome stood a magnificent marble dome, seventeen times as becoming as St. John's Basilica and twice as large as the Rose Bowl stadium. Arched glass windows graced the ceiling and a diffuse white light shone about the center of the dome. It wasn't sunlight, but it was pure white light. Teagan couldn't see beyond the glass, except that it seemed to be light out there, not dark and cavernous as she expected the shaft of an underground elevator to be. The light filtered down onto tinkling wind chimes that hung in the air, suspended by nothing stronger than a warm breeze, and past the heads of leafy palm trees and towering oak branches and piny evergreens alike. It cascaded down marble pillars and made prism chandeliers above her head blaze in thousands of colors.

“Calling all passengers of floor 927J," said a grainy P.A. voice. "Exit car B3 awaits. Please reload lift portal for disembarkation.”

It was then that Teagan noticed the hundreds of agents, strolling or arguing or swimming or eating or playing in the Lift Lounge.

Sunday, November 8, 2009

The Weir

My NaNoWriMo word count is over 8,500 (8,520 to be precise). I've written almost 1,800 of those words today. Some of what I've written today is almost good, and that makes today a very successful writing day.

Yesterday I imagined up the Weir, my villains, and their evil overlord, the Weird. My villains are my favorite part of my story. Also, with Skedaddle's help, I've made progress on the barbed wire horse. I now know why Teagan was pushed into making a barbed wire horse in the first place, which is kinda important, don't ya think, if this story is to make any sense. I'm also figuring out how she made the horse, and I have a vision for how it will grow and be used throughout the book.

Finally, while finishing (that's right--finishing!) my first sock of my pair, I learned how to graft stitches so that they look knitted rather than sewn. This has been so cool! It's a pretty sock pattern, isn't it. (Here's the link to Kristen's free pattern.)


Should I take care to make the stripes on my second sock match those on this one? My vote is yes, simply because the stripes are so wide. I think if they were less than five rows wide each, I would feel fine letting a more random striation occur. (Since these socks are of global importance, their striations are just that.)

Tata and goodnight.

Friday, November 6, 2009

today is great

I've written 5456 words, or 12 single spaced pages, of my novel so far. These include all of my brainstorming and rush writing when I had writers block or when Gideon was crying or puking. :) Clearly some of it isn't going to make the final cut. I am about half as far along as I "should" be by now, but I'm also half way to my own personal goal. Haha! If I make it to 20 pages, I'll be delighted, and probably be much happier ending with a 10,000 word story than with a 45,000 word novella that falls just short of "winning."

On other good news, my socks are coming along well. I have about three inches left on the first sock of the pair, and I have learned so much, like how to take out a single column of knitting to fix errors, rather than unwinding several inches of my sock or starting over. I now know how to make yarn overs. The socks are an experiment in decreases that lean to the left or the right, in maintaining even stitching, in controlling ladders, in finally "getting" sock construction, in becoming familiar enough with a complicated pattern that I don't refer to it often anymore, and, most of all, in keeping Kidoodle from yanking out my needles! The second sock will certainly knit up much more quickly!

Finally, Kidoodle has grown months today. He walks holding our hands, and today he has been practicing his balance, so that he walks as if he were on his own. He also practices jumping, giggles when he feeds his bottle to Skedaddle or me, and recognizes a clock in a book as the same thing we hang on our wall.